I think this was an good animation overall, and unlike mister "I rate 3 'cuz I'm cool", I had no problems with the sound. However, one thing I missed was some more lights from the sun, to give this really baking hot effect. That would have done it for me. The sun is very dull at the moment. But overall good animation. Keep it up!
Thank you for the thoughtful and actually USEFUL review. You are one of the few reviewers with criticism as an element of your comment who actually gave useful criticism. You might even be the only one with a useful and not stupid suggestion....
Wade, would you mind looking at the actual picture, rather than your own personal opinion about smoking? It was very well executed with the music, the animations(even though they could have had more to them) and the emotional theme. 9/10 from me, a 10/10 if you improve the drawings a slight bit ;)
I was going to leave the site to review another...
...but I couldn't. I keep keeping myself from actually clicking the back icon while listening to your music. Now, since I'm stuck here I thought I might as well write a review. I generally like the song VERY much, and I can't see many ways of improving it. One thing I personally could miss though, was the ability to loop. You might want to consider that next time, as I care to believe most of us listen to one track while doing something else, which means it should be able to just roll in the background without having the break that it has now when you try to loop it. But hey, this IS supposed to be an actual song and not just a loop, so you get a 10/10 from me.
Thanks for producing this! This goes on my favorites,
as far as I know you cannot NOT make a song loop on here.. so you'll just have to press the stop button hehehe :)
but hey glad you liked it man :)
thanks for the review!
... Is quality! I'd love to hear the full version, and have been waiting for it almost 2 months now!
You can get far.
You might want to make the vocals sound just a bit different... I'm sitting with a headset on, and the vocals specially annoys me, when you get higher in the pitch, as whatever sound effect you laid on doesn't sound tuned for that. But else, keep up the good work :D Rest of it is awesome, 10/10, 5/5, downloaded :D
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