I think this was an good animation overall, and unlike mister "I rate 3 'cuz I'm cool", I had no problems with the sound. However, one thing I missed was some more lights from the sun, to give this really baking hot effect. That would have done it for me. The sun is very dull at the moment. But overall good animation. Keep it up!
Thank you for the thoughtful and actually USEFUL review. You are one of the few reviewers with criticism as an element of your comment who actually gave useful criticism. You might even be the only one with a useful and not stupid suggestion....
Wade, would you mind looking at the actual picture, rather than your own personal opinion about smoking? It was very well executed with the music, the animations(even though they could have had more to them) and the emotional theme. 9/10 from me, a 10/10 if you improve the drawings a slight bit ;)
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